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One suggestion--delete unread if you don't want 'em:
The cloak chain/necklace looks like it's supposed to be centered on her chest, but it's noticeably off-center in our direction. A lot of artists have problems with centering; the trick is to map it onto the body rather than judge it by eye.
If it were centered, the point of the V would rest in the valley between her breasts, rather than halfway up the nearer breast. (It's amazing how many people draw superheroines with skin-tight v-necks that, for some reason, cover most of one breast but barely clear the nipple on the other side when we see them in 3/4 view. Our eyes fool us....)
I always try to pay attention to the colouring.